hurricane Jimena
September 3, 2009
Hurricane Jimena struck the center of the state of Baja California, it began in the mid-day devastating the town of Comondu, where the hurricane was completed houses in fishing villages, according to reports of the State Council of Civil Protection, before "Jimena "left in Los Cabos 500 3000, 1000 500 in La Paz, were left without water and electricity.Damage to human infrastructure was great.
--to a rodeo and danced wth....
ResponderEliminar--arrived to my house...
--Sunday I sent a job
-and my business
--in the afternoon I finished watching a movie. I was watching it with my mom on TV
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EliminarNO!!! Las correcciones se tienen que hacer en el original. Tiene que editar lo anterior con las correcciones que le di
ResponderEliminarya lo corregi profe.. :)
ResponderEliminarYou got 8 points from 10 possible points
ResponderEliminarhurricane Jimena
ResponderEliminarSeptember 3, 2009
Hurricane Jimena struck the center of the state of Baja California, it began in the mid-day devastating the town of Comondu, where the hurricane was complete houses in fishing villages, according to reports of the State Council of Civil Protection, before "Jimena "left in Los Cabos housed 500 3000, 1000 500 in La Paz, with damage to human infrastructure, but mainly in rural communities, where left without water or electricity.
profe ya esta arriva quite el otro y puse el que apenas dejo de tarea..:)
ResponderEliminar--where the hurricane was complete houses in fishing villages, according to reports
ResponderEliminar--before "Jimena" left in Los Cabos housed 500, 3000, 1000 500 in La Paz
Estas dos partes están confusas, difíciles de entender. Que esta tratando de acomodar aquí. digame y le dire como sale
ya lo corregui profe..:)
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ResponderEliminaryou got your 10 points. Great job!!!!!!!
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